Score: 1

"im curious to know if you have seen his artwork?"

submission: Awesome Grounds

date: December 16, 2007

people have probably already told you that he animates that way on purpose. his actual artwork looks very well done, and i gotta say, even though in the awesome series, his charactures are poorly drawn, at least you can tell what game there from. your anti awesome flash started out ok i must admit, but after a while it got boring. it would have been better if you had a well thought out argument to state. if you wrote a scrip on what to say and just say it, it would have been better off. instead it seemed like in the end you couldn't think of anything to say about it and just dragged it on.

i really hope that people dont try to hate you pheonix wrong series because of this (there still really good) in fact i think you should make another one, your good at those and that is what your known for. i hope to see stuff from you again d00d!

- Aj the SN!PE

Score: 10

"hey this works..."

submission: How not to die'

date: December 16, 2007

you would normaly find flash like this as a stick flash. if it was a stick flash though, it would be a mediocre at best flash, but the fact that you made them look like decent looking people made this flash amazing. this is proof that a flash cartoon can be great without needing amazing talent (not saying you don't have great talent) the fact that the characters looked somewhat simplistic and vague made it even better for me (i could picture me in that or picture someone else in place of the faceless people because of this) used only 3 colors and made it also somewhat of an artistic cartoon. the animation was very good aswell. you know what your doing. i cant believe that i was hesitant to watching this earlier.

Score: 10

"wow that was awesome!!!"

submission: The Horseman Show

date: December 9, 2007

i have been waiting for a new greasy moose cartoon, and here it is. so this was the reason you were talking about the captian manlove colors, thing.

the fight was short but epic. the humor was amazing as always. and the artwork...Phenominal!!!

you are in my mind one of the best on Newgrounds without a doubt.

BTW: i recently saw the other two horseman cartoons and thought they were funny as well but this one tops them. 5/5 definatly

Score: 9

"pretty good but a little short."

submission: Attack of the Wonkybirds

date: October 31, 2007

i hope you finish the story soon. i really liked the character design. the voices were pretty good too. it didnt have too much animation it seemed, but that gave it a comic book like feelling to it so that was cool too. looking forward to the conclusion.

-Aj the SN!PE

Score: 10

"i was waiting for this one to be released"

submission: Awesome Compilation Vol 4

date: October 20, 2007

i hated waiting for so long to watch just one that was in between all that stuff, when i can watch a group of them. i can't wait now until vol. five.

the one i haven't watch that looks like it will be cool is awesome dug. i always loved playing dig dug so.... yeah.

cool job like always, you know how to come up with some funny stuf. keep doing what you do best ego

-Aj the SN!PE

Score: 10

"you should have no prob. getting this in"

submission: Going Grim

date: October 19, 2007

this will definatly be in the halloween 07 collection. im actually hoping it also makes front page as well. that was so funny that no one took him seriously. well it is with good reason. it is halloween. i didn't see anything wrong with this flash (hence the 10) i hope you make a sequel for next year.

-Aj the SN!PE

Score: 2

"i can't understand what is being said."

submission: cartoon im working on

date: October 14, 2007

here is why. it is not clear. it is a high pitch fast mumbling, and the music is too loud as well. slow down the talk. it would also be better if the pitch was lower. unless you make it easier for people to hear what your saying, you might have a hard time getting your message across. i hope this helps you. dont give up.

Score: 6

"BAAAAAAAMMBAAAAAAa!!!!!"

submission: Bomba

date: October 12, 2007

wow. that was pretty good! it was kinda like mine sweeper but the show you the duds for like a second. i might just have to play that one again.

-Aj the SN!PE

Score: 9

"wow that was... wow"

submission: 3 Stupid Jokes

date: October 12, 2007

those could possible be the dumbest jokes that i laughed at. i love the idaho one the most. where did you come up with those? that was crazy!

Score: 3

"not bad, but..."

submission: Stickman Fight Epi. 1

date: October 12, 2007

we seen this type of flash before. stick man meets stick man. stick man fights stick man. stick man wins. only a few have ever stood out out, and they stood out for this reason. one: it had a very nice background. 2: it featured good music and sounds. 3: it had a decent story to it (why is he fighting?) 4: some even had a 3d look to them. now i am not saying that you suck or anything (the last thing i want is an unecessary email saying "why don't you make a better one better" because i havent made a flash. i have gotten plenty emails like that before because some cant take critisizm well) in fact this flash showed me that you know how to animate pretty good. the stick men moved pretty fluently.
now im not saying dont make a stick man flash because they suck (even though im not much of a stick man fan) im saying at least give them an adgenda, a purpose for fighting if nothing else. the results may shock you?

-Aj the SN!PE